Jackals and Arabs

After going through both, stories in class and then reading them through again on my own, I felt that the second version of the story was easier to understand and was an easier read altogether. What I found made it easier, was the fact that less complicated words and sentences were used. I also found that in the second version, the sentences were more descriptive allowing the reader to form a more vivid image of what was going on, as opposed to the first version which I found harder to understand. Although the second version may seem less acdemic due to the use of simpler words, it was a more enjoyable read. So in saying this the second version is more logical because it would be eaiser for most people to understand.